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TRUNK
         Shape:           Shape according to style
         Bark:          Well developed or not
         Marks:         Wire and other marks / unsightly
                      cuts
         Tapering:      Lack of inverted taper as well
                      correct tapering
         Shari:         Appearance appropriate to the tree
         BRANCHES
         Distribution:    Groupings
         Development:  Positioning of branches
         Bark:          Condition of main branches
         Ramification:     Extent of fine branch development
         Marks:         Avoidance of wire marks
         Jins:          As appropriate to the tree, give
                      aged appearance
         FOLIAGE
         Leaves:        Horticultural perfection
         Blemishes:     Evidence of disease, windburn etc.
         Size:          In proportion to the tree
         Distribution:    Not hanging below branch unless
                      weeping variety
         SOIL / SURFACE DRESSING
         Well finished:    Clear of weeds:
         Surface:       Appropriate surface cover e.g. moss
         ROOTS/NEBARI                                 Juniperus chinensis ‘Itoigawa’: Height - 44cms.
         Visibility:     Well or badly distributed as surface   In this instance, the question is whether the tree is back-to-front. Sadly, a superb trunk
                      roots (nebari)                  with good movement and beautifully created shari is masked by the lowest branch.
         Buttressed:    Shape of buttress at soil level   The remaining branches are not clearly defined due to the lack of refinement of the
         Other cover:    As appropriate to the tree(s)   foliage pads. Very dense foliage on upper part of the tree including apical region. Once

         Rock planting:   Roots give natural impression of   these factors are remedied, we will have a prize-winning tree. Overall balance between
                      having grown naturally (clasped) to   tree and pot is very good, with tidy surface dressing.
                      the rock.
         POT                                                                                     Pinus sylvestris:
         Shape & Style:   Appropriate to the nature of the                                       Height - 78 cms.
                      tree (species and style)                                                   Not quite there yet,
         Placement:     Tree correctly positioned within pot                                     but another tree with
         Appearance:    Cleanliness                                                              considerable potential.
         Size:          Good proportion to the tree(s), not                                      The basic design concept
                      over- or under-potted                                                      is good with the position
         Color          Appropriate to species                                                   of the tree in its pot well
         STANDS                                                                                  placed to counter the
         Shape & Style:  Appropriateness to tree/pot                                             outward movement of
                      combination.                                                               the trunk beyond the
         AESTHETIC QUALITY                                                                       periphery of the pot.
         Could be a subjective judgement but reflecting                                          Work needs to be done
         overall impression of the tree(s) within the pot or                                     in wiring and refining the
         displayed on a tray. Overall sense of balance and                                       branch structure; also with
         harmony.                                                                                further back-budding,
                                                                                                 there could be an excellent
          Recognizing the elements that make a bonsai—                                           foliage mass in due course.
        from the tree (species and style) to the pot and the                                     The primitive-style pot
        manner it is displayed—all contribute to our judging                                     reflects the ruggedness of
        processes. Through experience of having worked in                                        the trunk, bark and shari.
        creating bonsai, we learn by trial and error what ulti-
        mately constitutes a tree that reflects a good bonsai, a
        tree of which you feel justifiably comfortable in dis-
        playing.

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